Hey Dillon, this poem really struck a chord with me. The nostalgia for old tech like dial-up tones and floppy disks was spot on. It’s amazing how fast things have changed. The message about keeping a human touch in our tech-driven world really resonated. For your first poem, it’s really impressive! Maybe the flow could be a bit smoother, but overall, it’s a heartfelt and relatable piece. Keep it up!